Sunday, October 31, 2010

fast forward

rain drops beat down fast
this dried sidewalk glassed
in pain
pounding sounds go past
snarl of traffic's blast
in vain


here i want to cut

my scenes quickly ; but
the hours
minutes, seconds shut
the ticking somewhat
and sours

2 comments:

Jani said...

You can beautifuly creat scene and reader goes wuth it . great .

Mamta said...

Thank you!!